Welcome to a cornucopia of subject lines that you may feel free to swipe! It's the 67th issue of the Fundraising Writing Newsletter. Please forward this to someone lovely. (Lovely people can βsubscribe for free.)
In this issue:
Wednesday, November 9, 2022
Hi Reader,
On Giving Tuesday, I'm guessing, you don't want to look like just another green apple in a big bowl of other green apples.
It's better if you stand out . . .
You can do that by avoiding having the same "Giving Tuesday"-flag-waving subject line as everyone else in your supporters' inboxes.
See what I mean?
What you need, maybe, is:
Each of the following subject lines represents a nice red apple for you.
You'll notice none of them have the words "Giving Tuesday." People want to give because they love your cause and your offer, not just because it's Giving Tuesday.
Yes, it's fine to use "Giving Tuesday" in one of the subject lines for your email campaign; just be sure to mix it up and use a variety of approaches to create interest.
So, here are 25 subject lines for you to use as-is . . . or to inspire ideas of your own:
As Will Hunting says, "How do you like them apples?"
Good luck and happy writing!
(And remember, the only purpose of a subject line is to get an email opened . . . so it's important to feature a variety of styles and wordings.)
On January 26, 2023, Tom Ahern will be doing a 90-minute mega-webinar all about bequests.
You'll learn about the practicalities of charities promoting legacy giving β and you can take advantage of our trademark "All You Can Eat" Q&A session.
(Last time, the Q&A lasted 91 questions and over 4 hours!)
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For your brain, heart, and funny bone...
Until next time: May all your good emails for your good cause get opened, and may all your days be giving.
We'll see you in your inbox soon!
All our best,
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