Sometimes you just gotta move it ... and PIVOT! This is the 104th issue of the Fundraising Writing Newsletter. If you find value here, please tell your lovely peeps. (Your lovely peeps can βsubscribe here for free.)β
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Wednesday, August 30, 2023
Hi Reader,
We are packing up and moving down the road β next week! So Brett and I are currently extra busy.
We've got boxes that are packed and stacked.
And we've got boxes that are unpacked and stacked.
Since we're in full-on gung-ho moving mode β
I'm reminded me of this . . .
That's because the short answer to this question is:
But wait. You need context. And the long answer.
Context:
During a recent interview for a generosity report we're writing for a client, the interviewee asked, "Will you take out the umms and ahs?"
The long answer:
Yes, we will! β
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Interviews used for donor comms should always make the interviewee look and sound good. The idea is that the final piece should be representative, not verbatim.
You might say, βWe will make you sound as eloquent as we hear you in our hearts.β
Because, really, when we listen to someone in person our hearts filter out the umms and ahs and anything similarly slightly off β such as grammatical errors and circumlocution.
Therefore . . .
BUT keep in mind: you don't want to change so much that you lose the person's voice. Be sure to preserve some of their slang and informality to retain the sense of the unique and the element of the human. This feels more real.
Once you've done all your editing, it should feel natural.
Send the copy you've written to the interviewee for approval. Ideally, they'll read it and think: "Yeah, that sounds like me."
It's our job as writers β we do the hard work of making it seem easy. π
Time to get moving?
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If so, yay!
If not . . . and you are now or soon will be writing your year-end appeal . . . and you do not feel 100% confident . . .
. . . then I urge you to learn all about Tom's webby here.
(featuring guest expert Jeff Brooks!
and I will be moderating)
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Until next time: May your donor comms always make people sound more like who they really are, because they deserve it!
Grateful,
Fundraising Copywriters βFundraisingWriting.comβ β |
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