Wait, am I supposed to remember this?
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Wednesday, January 3, 2023
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Hi Reader,
You know how pretty much everything pre-Covid feels like it happened at least 10 years ago?
(It's not just me, right?)
Time is weird. So is memory. There are just too many things to keep track of.
Heck, like Kermit (above), I could have you tell me your name and forget it 5 seconds later. No offense β you're awesome. It's not you, it's me.
If you can relate, you can see why...
This can be a problem if you assume your donors in fact do remember your last story.
For example, here's a mistake to avoid in your newsletters:
Notice that the impact and donor-relevant YOU language here are on point β yet the messaging is not as strong as it could be. To fully feel the impact of Sarah's transformation, we first need to fully remember Sarah.
It's not unlike with a favorite tv show. You love it. You watch it regularly. Still, you benefit from the regular reminders: e.g., "Previously, on Survivor..."
To really feel the transformation, we need the full story.
We need a more detailed recap of the problem.
Something like:
These are simplified examples, but I trust you get the idea. The second example is the way to go because it highlights the impact by first recapping the problem so as to establish a striking contrast between the problem and the solution.
So please: remember to remember β reminding is caring.
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Until next time: May you always remember: your donors forget β kindly remind them. π€
Grateful,
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